Sunday Rain

Pink in the rain

Sunday Rain
(Original Version)

The window screen is trying to do its crossword puzzle,
but appears to know only vertical words.
~John Updike

Yellow in the rain

Sunday Friday Rain
(The Version I Like)

The sunday rain
plays crossword puzzles
on my window pane.

But seems to know
only the words
across.

~John Updike

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